英語六級作文范文賞析：愛情與學習

英語六級滿分作文：愛情與學習

Love and Learning

愛情與學習

Towards love and learning, college teachers and students hold controversial views.

The majority of college teachers, especially old teachers, argue that students should give uplove and concentrate on learning. They say that campus love is time-and-energy-consumingand tears students away from their main task. If a student ever falls in love, he/she willundoubtedly neglect his/her studies and gradually lag behind his/her classmates. A fewteachers, therefore, suggest that the university authorities restore the traditional regulationagainst love during students' school years .

On the contrary, students hold that it is natural for young people to fall in love on the campusbecause they meet every day and their everyday meeting produces romantic passion towardseach other. They insist that the campus is not the Garden of Eden and love is not the ForbiddenTree. They take for example some of theirf riends who, falling in love, are studying harder andhave made greater progress to please their boy/girl friends .

In my opinion, both views are lop-sided. If a student does not give himself/herself away in lovebut takes it as a drive, love produces positive effect. But if he/she indulges himself/ herself toodeeply in love, then he/she will be a devoted lover but a frustrated learner.

CET6六級作文結構分析：

·Int roduction

* Two different views

· Teachers’argue

* Campus love — time and energy con suming

* Campus love — should be forbidden

· Students’argue

* Campus love — natural

* Campus love — promote learning

· Conclusion

* Both views lop-sided

* Depending on how to deal with it

CET6六級作文內容分析：

本文是一篇議論文。引言部分開宗明義提出師生對這一話題的爭議; 主體部分分別擺出兩種不同論點和論證, 結尾部分是作者的態(tài)度, 不偏不倚地加以評論。本文的命題和寫作是議論文的常見模式。

CET6六級作文常用句型：

controversial a. 有爭議的

tear...away from 使……離棄

lag behind 落后于

univer sity authorities 校方

restore traditional regulation 恢復傳統(tǒng)校規(guī)

students' school years 學生在學期間

romantic passion 浪漫的感情

Garden of Eden 伊甸園

Forbidden Tree 禁果

please v. 取悅于

lop-sided a. 片面的

drive n. 推動

indulge oneself in 沉緬于

devoted a. 忠實的

frustrated a. 挫敗的