?2019年10月自考英語(二)作文寫作必背通用模版

2019年10月自考英語(二)作文寫作必背通用模版

利弊分析型作文模板：

思路： 1、描述現(xiàn)象 2、介紹觀點(第二段，利;第三段，弊) 3、作者觀點 /結論

范例作文：網(wǎng)絡，是新世紀的科技產物，也是新世紀的代名詞。我們的前輩不會上網(wǎng)，懂得什么叫 “伊妹兒 ”的人真可謂 “鳳毛麟角 ”。而今，如果你不懂網(wǎng)絡，那你就會成為新世紀 “盲人 ”。請就網(wǎng)絡對日常生活的影響發(fā)表你的看法。

at present, there is no doubt that network plays an increasingly important role in our lives . we are all aware that,like everything else, networks have both favorable and unfavorable aspects (have both advantages and disadvantages).generally speaking, there are several main advantages of network. with the development of technology, a lot of information is gathered together through networks.information is shared and exchanged quickly. by accessing networks through various means, people truly realized to find the information they need everywhere on the networks from time to time. networks greatly facilitate the people ’s live, work and entertainment. even people staying at home, work,shopping, entertainment, information retrieval and etc. can be completed through networks. however, just as every things has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of networks .due to the convenience and broad resource information of networks, some internet users on the network had a severe dependence, but ignored the real life. the emergence of online games, also makes some young people addicted to online games and neglected in the study. the emergence of hackers makes some confidential information stolen possibility.weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of networks.we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of networks outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.

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at present, there is no doubt that plays an increasingly important role in our lives .we are all aware that, like everything else,have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.generally speaking, there are several main advantages of ?(介紹優(yōu)點)however, just as every coin has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of ? (介紹缺點) weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of . we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.

圖表型作文模版1：

第一段，結合圖表，將圖表的信息描述清楚，點出主題；第二段，圍繞主題展開討論，分析原因；第三段，結合上段討論，發(fā)表自己針對這種現(xiàn)象的評論，說明危害，重申自己觀點

作文范例：

the chart gives us an overall picture of the changes in the ownership of houses. the first thing we notice is that stateowned houses ’ ratio is diminishing and provite houses ’ is increasing. this means that as time goes by, the proportion of occupied private houses is growing.we can see from the statistics given that state-owned house is75% of total, which ratio was much higher than private houses ’in 1990. after 1990, the ratio on private house is increased as time. the figures also tells us that the increasing range on private house is much bigger in second 5 years than in first 5 years. in the second column of 2000, we can see that private house ratio accounts for 80% of total.judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that private purchase of house becomes more and more. the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is that people ’s income increases much more. it is high time that we should develop the economical housing construction to meet more private needs.

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 the chart gives us an overall picture of the (圖表主題) . the first thing we notice is that_increasing (圖表最大特點) . this means that as (進一步說明) .we can see from the statistics given that _ (圖表細節(jié)一) .after ___ (細節(jié)一中的第一個變化) ,the (幅度 +時間，緊跟著的變化) . the figures also tells us that__ (圖表細節(jié)二) . (數(shù)據(jù)位置 ,如 in the second column ),we can see that _ _____ (進一步描述) .judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that_(結論) . the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is that_(給出原因) .it is high time that we (發(fā)出倡議) .

圖表型作文模版2：

范例作文，根據(jù)下圖寫一篇 160-200 個

單詞的文章 1.解釋它要表達的意思 2.簡單描述這幅圖 3.給出你的評論 注：火鍋里的文字有：佛、功夫、解構、禮、畢昇、儒、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等

作文范例：

the picture showed us a boiling hotpot of various forms of both domestic and alien culture. thehodgepodge could be categorized as literature, moral values and performing arts.as far as i am concerned, the picture characterizes the status quo of chinese society in which chinese and western culture conflict with each other but also merge into a unique form to a certain degree. in the highly-integrated world today, no country is an isolated island. every nation is faced with miscellaneous alien culture, roaring to overwhelm the domestic culture and china is no exception. however, it does not mean the foreign culture shall be eliminated or eradicated. it is up to the option of the tasters of hotpot, or in other words, the chinese people to exact the essence of this combination, be it chinese or western, and to take full advantage of the world has in store for us.

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the picture showed us 。(揭示漫畫的主題，再后面跟一句進一步說明一下)as far as i am concerned, the picture characterizes 。(全面分析漫畫主題，以及產生這種現(xiàn)象的原因)however, it does not mean (提出你反對的觀點) i think that.( 提出你的觀點 )

對立觀點型作文模版

思路 

第一段：引言 (引山討論的主題( x)，提出兩種對立的觀點(a 和 b)，有時還可略提及支持這兩種觀點的理由 )

第二段：正文(表明自己的看法，闡述自己支持某一觀點的理由，或/和駁斥自己反對的觀點)

第三段：結論(總結全文，重中自己的觀點)這種篇章結構的重點放在表達自己的觀點上，更能充分地闡述自己的觀點，使自己的觀點更充實、更有說服力。

作文范例

directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic do “l(fā)ucky numbers ” really bring good luck? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese)below: 1. 有些人認為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運。 2. 也有些人認為數(shù)字與運氣無關。 3. 試說明你的看法。

①when asked about lucky numbers, different people will offerdifferent opinions. some people think that ② lucky numbers can bring good luck. they hold this view because ③they believe lucky numbers will help them fulfill their wishes - to be rich or successful. ④however, there are still many people who wont agree. they argue that ⑤ such kind of idea is only ignorant and superstitious belief. besides, ⑥they think numbers are just numbers and each number is equal in its importance.⑦personally, i am on the side of the latter argument. for one thing, ⑧ numbers, including lucky numbers, are just a tool for counting, they dont have magic power. for another, ⑨whether we will have good luck or not depends on ourselves instead of lucky numbers, if we work hard and make good preparations, good luck will come to us. ⑩therefore, lucky numbers dont bring good luck. it is our hard work and good preparations that bring us good luck.

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⑧ therefore/in conclusion, .

解決問題型模版

思路 

第一段：引言 (提出需要解決的問題或遇到的困難 )

第二段：正文 (說明問題/困難的不同方面及如何一一解決 )

第三段：結論 (展望問題/困難解決的前景 )

作文范例

directions: in this section you are required to write a composition on the topic “reduce waste on campus ”. you should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in chinese below:

1. 目前有些校園內浪費現(xiàn)象嚴重 ;2. 浪費的危害 3. 從我做起，杜絕浪費。

reduce waste on campus

as is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. we can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on. the negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. in the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. if they don ’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people ” when they graduate. in the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. there are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.as far as i am concerned, i should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. first of all, i will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. what ’s more, i ’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.

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①nowadays /as is known to all/with , we /many people /students are facing /have to face(the problem of) .②there are several different ways /channels to tackle /solvethe problem. first ，③ . second ，④ .⑤ besides /furthermore ，.⑥as far as i am concerned/as to me ，i prefer /choose to .

⑦the reasons are as follows .for one thing ，⑧ . for another,⑨. ⑩and above all /most important of all,.⑾therefore ，

利弊分析型作文模板：

思路：

1、描述現(xiàn)象 2、介紹觀點(第二段，利;第三段，弊) 3、作者觀點 /結論

范例作文：網(wǎng)絡，是新世紀的科技產物，也是新世紀的代名詞。我們的前輩不會上網(wǎng)，懂得什么叫 “伊妹兒 ”的人真可謂 “鳳毛麟角 ”。而今，如果你不懂網(wǎng)絡，那你就會成為新世紀 “盲人 ”。請就網(wǎng)絡對日常生活的影響發(fā)表你的看法。

at present, there is no doubt that network plays an increasingly important role in our lives . we are all aware that,like everything else, networks have both favorable and unfavorable aspects (have both advantages and disadvantages). generally speaking, there are several main advantages of network. with the development of technology, a lot of information is gathered together through networks.information is shared and exchanged quickly. by accessing networks through various means, people truly realized to find the information they need everywhere on the networks from time to time. network s greatly facilitate the people ’s live, work and entertainment. even people staying at home, work,shopping, entertainment, information retrieval and etc. can be completed through networks.however, just as every things has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of networks .due to the convenience and broad resource information of networks, some internet users on the network had a severe dependence,but ignored the real life. the emergence of online games, also makes some young people addicted to online games and neglected in the study. the emergence of hackers makes some confidential information stolen possibility.weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of networks.we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of networks outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.

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at present, there is no doubt that plays an increasingly important role in our lives . we are all aware that, like everything else,have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.generally speaking, there are several main advantages of ?(介紹優(yōu)點)however, just as every coin has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of ? (介紹缺點)weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of . we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.

圖表型作文模版：

思路

第一段，結合圖表，將圖表的信息描述清楚，點出主題

第二段，圍繞主題展開討論，分析原因

第三段，結合上段討論，發(fā)表自己針對這種現(xiàn)象的評論，說明危害，

重申自己觀點

作文范例：

the chart gives us an overall picture of the changes in the ownership of houses. the first thing we notice is that state owned houses ’ ratio is diminishing and provite houses ’ is increasing. this means that as time goes by, the proportion of occupied private houses is growing we can see from the statistics given that state-owned house is 75% of total, which ratio was much higher than private houses ’in 1990. after 1990, the ratio on private house is increased as time. the figures also tells us that the increasing range on private house is much bigger in second 5 years than in first 5 years. in the second column of 2000, we can see that private house ratio accounts for 80% of total.judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that private purchase of house becomes more and more. the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is that people ’sincome increases much more. it is high time that we should develop the economical housing construction to meet more private needs.

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the chart gives us an overall picture of the (圖表主題) . the first thing we notice is that_increasing (圖表最大特點) . this means that as (進一步說明) . we can see from the statistics given that _ (圖表細節(jié)一) . after ___ (細節(jié)一中的第一個變化) ,the (幅度 +時間，緊跟著的變化) . the figures also tells us that__ (圖表細節(jié)二) . (數(shù)據(jù)位置 ,如 in the second column ),we can see that_ _____ (進一步描述) .judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that_(結論) . the reason for this, as far as i am concerned isthat_ (給出原因) .it is high time thatwe (發(fā)出倡議) .

漫畫型作文模版

思路 ：同圖表型作文模版。范例作文，根據(jù)下圖寫一篇 160-200 個單詞的文章

1.解釋它要表達的意思 2.簡單描述這幅圖 3.給出你的評論 注：火鍋里的文字有：佛、功夫、解構、禮、畢昇、儒、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等

作文范例：

the picture showed us a boiling hotpot of various forms of both domestic and alien culture. thehodgepodge could be

寫作范文匯總

how to be a good learner?

as a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. we need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. after class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homewo rk on time. it ’s good to study in groups and help each other. as a student, working hard is important, but do more reading in our free time. if we have any problems, we ’d better ask others for help. i hope all these will be helpful to us.

點評：句子較完整，能簡單介紹學習方法，但方法過于簡單，缺乏自己的獨特的學習方法。語法上無大錯，僅有個別小錯誤。

dear tony:

i ’m glad to know that you are going to learn chinese. i will give some advice.learning chinese can be really fan. first, you should write the new words in groups and read them every day. you can remember all the words by doing this. second, it ’s a good way to improve your listening. third, do you like reading? if you like, try to read chinese newspaper and magazines and pay attention to the sentences. or you can just read for fun. last,what about going to the chinese corner in your school? it ’s very interesting to talk to chinese people. if you do that, you ’ll be able to learn chinese well. i think this is helpful for you. e-mail me if you have any other questions.

點評：層次較清晰，語言流暢，但學習方法過于老套，有所重復。

women in the modern world

women are playing an increasing important part in society today. in many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. we can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.women are no longer looked down upon by society.with the changes in their social role, women ’s position in the amily has been improved as well. husband and wife are now qual in family. they cope with problems of daily life together,and share happiness with each other. also, you can hardly find ut that in today ’s families, women are being busy with dinner,whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading nwspapers. in spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. a number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. that ’s really the problems was should solve immediately.

點評：切題。論證充分，有說服力;論證手段豐富(舉證、正反)表達思想清楚 ‘語言流暢，詞匯豐富，連貫性好。其本上無大的語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯誤。

direction: you are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “the advantage and disadvantage of the internet. ” you should base your composition on the following outline:(1) 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的好處(2) 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)產生的問題(3) 我的看法

the advantage and disadvantage of the internet

internet plays an important role in life. when you surf the net,the world become a smaller place. people can discuss about different topics and make friends with others. what ’s more,they can work, play, and even have meetings on the net.internet is indeed one of the most wonderful things man has ever invented.but just like most other inventions, the internet has its problems. some people are just over-enthusiastic to offer worthless information. official also find it hard to prevent invasion of criminals online. and sometimes bad information on the net does great harm to teenagers.there is no doubt that the internet has changed our lives.however, we should use it properly and scientifically. also, the internet will serve us better if strict administration is applied.

范文點評：此文緊緊圍繞提綱中的關鍵詞 ---好處和問題 ----對互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利弊進行了討論。三段文字分別對應了提綱中的三個要點，并且每段的首句明確點明了該段的主題，中心明確，結構緊湊。文中句式有變化，顯得活潑生動。

direction: you are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “wealth and health ” you should have your composition on the following outlines.(1) 有人認為財富意味著一切。(2) 實際上健康比財富更重要。(3) 是比較說明。

wealth and health

when asked what the aim of their life is, the vast majority of people say “making money ”. for one thing, wealth can ensure them comfortable life.however, as far as i am concerned, if i had to choose wealth and health, i would prefer health. on the one hand, rich people can afford everything they dream of. but sometimes wealth cannot buy health. on the other hand, people who are healthy but not wealthy can make money through their own efforts and can enjoy the fruit of their labor. in conclusion, health is more important than wealth. Those who are rich but are not healthy, are actually suffering.

點評： 本文緊扣提綱展開論述。觀點明確，條例清晰，用詞較準確。

direction: you are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “what does friendship mean ?”you should have your composition on the following outlines.(1) 友誼是人生永恒的主題。(2) 友誼到底意味著什么。(3) 友誼的重要性。

what does friendship mean?

what does friendship mean? there is no definite answer. As on eternal theme in literature, friendship is indispensable to daily life.friendship is as important to our life as what salt is to dasher.when you are happy, friendship is like adding flowers to carpet;when you are sad, having friends are a consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you are facing difficulties, you can turn to friends for help. we admire the great friendship between marx and engel,which drew them together and pushed them on the road to exploring and fulfilling communism.friendship is not almighty, but no one can live happily without it.

點評：本文類似抒情式的議論文，第二段中運用了排比句，并巧妙

地運用恩格斯和馬克思的例子來證明友誼的重要性。

a person i will never forget

the person i will never forget is miss wang, my junior english teacher. she was tall and nice with long hair. she is also active because she is fond of playing tennis, traveling and listening to music. in addition, miss wang is kind and responsibility. At first, no matter how hard i tried, i couldn ’t do well in english. It was miss wang who gave me a hand in time. and my english has improved a lot now.how lucky, i am to be a student of miss wang.

點評：文章開門見山，點奔主題，利用題目，完成主題的導入。文中使用了定語從句、原因狀語從句和強調句等復合句使文章更顯其魅力。最后作者用感嘆句總結，給全文劃上了一個圓滿的句號。本文作者采用了 “總---分—總”的寫作方法，層次清晰，要點全面，發(fā)揮的合情合理。

as is known to everyone, health is very important to us. all of us realize we should keep health and we will live longer and better. the following tips will help you a lot.first, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. you should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. don ’t stay up! second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. it is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. my idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food. third, start doing some exercise every day. i ’m sure physical exercise does a lot for a person ’s health. and the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and don ’t lose your temper at any ti me.

點評： 本文是一個常談話題，講到保持健康的重要性和方法，作者從自身的角度給大家一些保持健康的建議。 名詞性的從句和定語從句的恰當運用讓整篇文章如行云流水般流暢自如。一些詞匯、短語的運用也非常到位，整篇文章能很好地圍繞中心思想，條理清楚，行文流暢，緊扣主題。

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writing 1)as is known to everyone, health is very important to us. All of us realize we should keep healthy and we will live longer and better. the following tips will help you a lot.first, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. you should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. don ’t stay up!second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. it is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. my idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food.third, start doing some exercise every day. i ’m sure physical exercise does a lot for a person ’s health. and the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and don ’t lose your temper at any time.

2) mr. black will go to beijing by plane at ten thirty on Monday morning. then he will visit the great wall and go to wang fujing to do some shopping from tuesday to wednesday. he is going to fly to hainan island at eight forty on thursday morning. He will go to visit “tianya hiajiao ” and go scuba diving in sanya from friday to saturday morning. at 4:50 on saturday afternoon,he will fly back to beijing. then he will fly back home at about 3:20 on Sunday afternoon.

3) i love my hometown

xuzhou city is my hometown. it lies in the north of jiangsu with a popular of over 5 million. in the past, it was poor and dirty.most of the people here lived a hard life. but great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. it has wide roads. on both sides are many tall buildings. you can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. The people ’s living conditions have improved a lot. i ’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful. i love my hometown.

4) no breakfast, no good

now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast. but not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study. and at our age, it is time for us to grow up. so our bodies are in great need of energy. if we don ’t have breakfast, there will be not enough energy. this may affect our growth. what’s more, it is a long time between breakfast and lunch. breakfast provides us with the energy our body needs. without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes. so, we must have breakfast.

5) computers

computers are wonderful machines. they can store large amounts of information and never forget it. they can process problems quickly and also provide information quickly. computers can ’t think, but they can do things that human beings cannot do. it is very important tool in every office and in every home, so they are very useful. more and more people are getting interested in them these years. we should learn how to use computers now. then we will get ready for the future.

6) internet shopping is a new way of shopping.

 it offers a lot of advantages. the most important one is convenience. You can shop whenever you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. secondly it is often cheaper to buy goods through the internet and it is also easy to find want you are looking for. there are some disadvantages, too. you cannot see the products or check their quality. besides you cannot enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.